I AM AMANDA

I am a singer and outgoing.
I wonder what life is going to be like in five years.
I hear bells ringing
I see you looking at me
I want to be rich
I am a singer and outgoing

I pretend to have no problems
I feel powerful
I touch silk
I worry about whom to trust
I cry when life is not going the way it's suppose to
I am a singer and outgoing

I understand that I'm not perfect
I say i got to try harder
I dream true
I try to stay and be me
I hope to make my family happy
I am a singer and outgoing

Comments

Wes You Rock!!!!! said…
I think your poem was not well put, it seemed rushed and i see pizza grease on it. I think next time you should take you time and use your mind to express yourself not your hands. Don't take this as an insult, but constructive criticism.
July 2, 2008 at 8:38 AM
Garnett said…
I think your poem is good i see you will be a strong singer in the future .
July 2, 2008 at 8:47 AM
melinda said…
AAAAAAAAAAmandaaaa..lmfao cool shit ...original...you sing?
July 2, 2008 at 8:48 AM
Unknown said…
hi i have to leave a comment so nice poem
July 2, 2008 at 8:57 AM
jose.inamagua said…
You can't trust people?why?
July 2, 2008 at 9:11 AM
kimberly said…
I like that the poem seemed real and how you really feel as a person. The way you feel is the way I feel sometimes....But look on the bright side a Least you could sing. I can't even hit a note...lol***
July 9, 2008 at 8:37 AM
angie said…
i like ur poem dude..i wanna b rich one day 2 ..maybe when we become rich we can shopping lol ;p
July 14, 2008 at 8:33 AM
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